
“The seed of a poem lay dormant in my heart.”
~ from “Winged Words”, Valsa George
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The seed of a poem lay dormant in my heart, waiting for the right conditions and proper environment to bloom into a poetic expression. Laughter and joy weren’t the right inducers, perhaps tears and heartbreak would make this seed germinate better.
And that’s how it happened, I became a poet when my broken heart wanted to express the emotions mere prose wasn’t able to express. The unshed tears helped moisturize this dormant tiny grain to grow and gift me words full of feelings and emotions.
My pen wrote verses that moved others besides me too.
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beautifully said and love knowing your start.. heartbreak seems to do it for a lot of us. 💞
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Thanks a lot Cindy. Though it’s true that when feeling emotional, we produce the most moving verses, I didn’t start writing poems because I was heartbroken. That was a bit of fiction. ❤️
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Belladonna
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You’re welcome!
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🙏🏼🙏🏼💖
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love your take, Sadje G
beautifully expressed 🤍
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Many thanks Destiny 🌸
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I think some of the best poems are born from the darker places, emotions and events, so your prose resonated with me. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks Mish. Yes you’re right it’s when we are feeling sad or experiencing heartbreak that we write poetry that moves others too. A lovely line to write to. Thanks
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Heartbreak has given birth to a large number of poets in the modern world. It’s true that our most emotional time is the time when we produce the words or actions that’s borne from inside within us to the outside world. I have loved reading poems since my childhood so the feelings for writing it literally came to me when I encountered my first interest in a girl. I neither dated nor confessed my feelings to her but I asked to write her poems whenever she’s celebrating her birthday. I’ve been writing for her since 2018, the last one I composed for her was in December, 2022.
This one is beautiful Sadje.
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Thanks Phil. You’re very right that a heart full of emotions can project tone into beautiful, heartfelt verses. Thanks for sharing
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You’re welcome.
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I’ve found the themes in poetry often leaned more towards life’s sorrows. Lovely piece.
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Yes it does. Though mine seldom is sorrowful as I have other priorities. Even when feeling sad, I try to write something uplifting.
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I noticed that too. You’re a sweet person. ❤
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Thanks Susan 💖
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Most people can relate to sadness. Well done ❤️
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Thank you so much Paula ❤️❤️❤️
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Amen to that heartbreak becoming the muse.
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Thanks a lot Paul.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much Elizabeth ❤️
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Oh wow! Beautifully penned.
“Unwashed tears…helped….grain to grow..words full of feelings and emotion.” …superb writing Sadje. Brava!!
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I’m much obliged dear friend for your encouragement. 🥰
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And thank you for yours, my friend. Happy Wednesday!
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💕💞💖
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Loved your take, Sadje.
Beautifully written😊
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Thank you so much
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Lovely!
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Thanks my friend
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Beautiful, Sadje. People think of love when they hear the word “Poem”. While that is very often the emotion and force behind a poem, it’s not the only one. Heartbreak is perhaps the strongest.
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Thanks Nancy. Yes sorrow and tears are more motivating than love when it comes to writing poetry
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I try to keep my poetry uplifting but many beautiful poems come from heartbreak. Nicely done, Sadje.
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Thanks a lot Eugi.
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Most welcome, Sadje.
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Beautiful piece, Sadje. Sometimes, sorrow can lead for poetry inspiration. 💞
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Thanks a lot Lauren
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You’re very welcome!
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How beautiful and relatable, Sadje ❤
~David
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Thanks a lot my friend
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Beautiful 😍. It is one way how we access the poet within us all
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Thanks my friend. It’s true for many.
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This part gets to me: “unshed tears helped moisturize this dormant tiny grain to grow and gift me words” and poetry is so good for that. There is true healing in the expression ❤
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Thanks Li. Yes with expressing our feelings we feel lighter and better.
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❤ You're welcome.
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Inspiration can be fickle. I tease that my muse helps me, but really it is just what is happening that triggers one thought over another. And yes, I do have gobs of teen-angst tear-spilling heart-breaking verse… Getting those thoughts on paper is a type of healing. And allows us to move on to brighter days 🙂
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Very true Jules. Heart break is not just about love but other things in life also bring about this state of mind.
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🙂
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Wow this was beautiful!
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Thanks my friend
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You are welcome.
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💝
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