
There’s a secret place
A place forgotten by time
Enclosed in a crumbling wall
It lays vacant and seemingly abandoned
Look closely and if you’re lucky you will
See the tiny elves, pixies and garden fairies
Jumping in the piles of dried golden leaves
Running around trying to catch each other
But… Shush…… be very very quiet
Because one squeak from you and they’ll
Magically disappear as if they never existed
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Written in response to CCC # 225, hosted by Crispina Kemp
#Keepitalive
#CCC
This is lovely, I’ll read it to my granddaughter!
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Thanks a lot Keith. It’s a lovely comment 🥰
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Wow Sadje! Beautiful🥰💖
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Thanks a lot my dear.
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My pleasure🤗💕..
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Sadje has the most precious imagination.✨✨
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful imagery, Well done, Sadje. Bravo!!
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Thank you Suzette! ❤️❤️❤️
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My pleasure my friend.
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❤️❤️❤️
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Bouquets…
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💐
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Nicely written. I could imagine them.
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Thanks Rebecca 😻🥰❤️
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So enchanting… And such a vivid image you created with your lovely words🤍
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Many thanks my friend
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Welcome always
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💙💙💙
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Excellent!
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Thanks a lot E A
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😊
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💜
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Stay quiet, you may see them.
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Indeed. 😍🥰
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This is magically soothing and lovely Sadje!💞
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Thanks Cindy. One of those that wrote itself.
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Nice!!!👍🏾
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🥹
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Beautiful Sadje. I think I’ll stay a while
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Thanks Brenda! I’d too. 🥰😍
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Utterly gorgeous ❤
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Thanks Lolsy.
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How do you manage to spread so much beauty through your words😅❤
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Aww, that’s such a sweet compliment. 🥰🥰🥰
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❤✨
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💜🥰
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You have a lovely imagination. Thank you for sharing your stories.
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Thanks Patricia. 😍
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Aha such lovely imagery ☺️
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Thanks a lot Aboli.
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I love your imagination, Sadje. The place does look magical
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Thanks Maria
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Simple, yet such a magnificent piece.. Bravo..!! 🤗
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Many thanks my friend
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My pleasure .. 😊
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😍😍😍
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Lovely. I can visualize. A delightful poem, Sadje.
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Thanks ❤️
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Welcome, dear. ❤️❤️
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🙏🏼🌹
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Perhaps if we imagine we are a pixie or fairy we too can be included? 🙂
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Oh yes I think we will be allowed to frolic in fun.
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*Very good!*
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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🙂
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Enchanting!
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Thanks my friend
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Delightful, Sadje. It does look like an abandoned wall garden. And I wouldn’t be at all surprised to see pixies and elves and their like here.
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Thanks Crispina. It sure does looks like it. 😍
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What a fun poem!
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Thanks Leigha 😍
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