
Kerfe’s prompt guidelines;
- Compose a haibun that contrasts past and present;
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My beloved city boasts of a canal running through its entire length in a curving line, following its contours. When days were younger and people were not that plenty, the road running parallel to the canal was often deserted in the hot summer afternoons, save people, especially children who had no air conditioning, or access to a swimming pool would like to swim in the not so clean water of the canal. They’d streak across the road, its hot surface burning their bare feet and take a running jump into the canal water. Now we have a population of around 12 million and people are more affluent, but on summer afternoons, your eyes will meet the same sight as they did 30-40 years ago!
Hot deserted roads
Squeals of children jumping
In muddy water
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In response to W3 # 43, hosted by David
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Aww, Sadje/ How beautifully you did that. I love this. Thanks.
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Thanks Selma ❤️
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My complete pleasure.
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What city are you referring to, if I may ask?
Joanna
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Lahore, Pakistan
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Thank you, Sadje, very kind of you. I like your memories…
Joanna
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Thanks Joanna 💜
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You are welcome!
Joanna
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🙏🏼🙏🏼👍🏼
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Thank you!
Joanna
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You’re welcome
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Love your description, creates a lovely image 🤍
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Thanks a lot Destiny! You would enjoy our vibrant city.
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It’s been a dream destination for my dad and husband. Insha Allah, one day, I would love to visit your city🤍
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Thanks Destiny. It’s a much beloved city for our whole family
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… And justly so. Welcome Sadje G🤍
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Beautiful poetry prose, and your words full of nostalgia…warms my heart. Brava!!
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Thank you so much Suzette! It’s my first time trying to write haibun 😍
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You, nailed it.
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Much appreciated 🥰
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Awesomeness!
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❤️❤️❤️
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This is so vivid and beautiful Sadje🌹
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Thanks a lot Mich.
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well done and how fun!
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Thanks Beth.
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Such a vivid memory. I love your haibun!
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Thank you so much! I wasn’t sure how to write it but I’m glad it’s the right way to do it
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Very nostalgic Sadje and wonderfully described! 🙏😁👏👌
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Thank you Ken. It’s a scene I’ve often witnessed.
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Kids will be kids 😂
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Oh yes they will be. Thanks Brenda
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Picture of a memory… beautiful ❤️
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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A walk down memory lane
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Yes indeed. Thanks
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love how you described this in prose and narrowed it down in your 3 lines Sadje! 💞
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Thanks Cindy! It was a new attempt for me. 🥰
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love that you try new things Sadje! hooray for you.. extra points! 👏
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Thanks 😀
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I remember my bare feet on those hot summer sidewalks and streets! You’ve painted a vivid picture of your city, both now and then. And the haiku made me smile. (K)
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Thank you so much! 😍
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What a wonderful childhood picture you paint ❤️
(I swam in the River Thames as a child—where you wouldn’t dream of doing it today)
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Thanks Lesley. Yes, that would a strict no-no today.
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Water certainly is an eternal attraction on a hot day! 💞💞💞
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Oh yes it sure is.
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Kids love to play in water, muddy or not.
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Yup, they have no reservations.
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Sadje – this is such a slice of life! May I ask if you were one of those children who would run and jump into the canal?
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David
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Thanks David! Nopes I don’t know how to swim 😅
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😨
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It’s not unusual here. For one our central region is land locked, except for the canal and a few drying rivers and you’d know the Muslim women don’t/ shouldn’t wear a swimming costume ( at least they do but it’s a cumbersome affair)
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Oh, that makes so much sense!
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I knew you would see it.
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