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A star shines brightly
Catching everyone’s eye
The darkness envies
Bright rays of the sun
All life depends on it
It’s warmth life-giving
Like sunflowers we can’t
Exist without our sun
A star circled by adoring planets
Like a queen surrounded by
Respectful ladies-in-waiting
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Word count; 44
Written for; dVerse quadrille- Stars, hosted by De this week
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Beautiful poetry. Love the tegal imagery.
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Thanks a lot Suzette. 🤩
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My pleasure!!
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❤️❤️❤️
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Lovely take Sadje G… Ends so grand 👌
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Thanks Destiny. 💗
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I love this Sadje. So many beautiful images in so few words
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Thank you so much Brenda. ❤️
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Oh this is lovely, your observations shine like the star herself does.
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Thanks a lot Li.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Ladies in waiting ~ delightful.
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Thanks Helen. 🤩
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Very nice Sadje!
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Thanks a lot Cheryl
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Yes, van Gogh painting, it’s amazing.
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Absolutely right.
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I love those finishing lines, what great imagery
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Thanks a lot Deb. 🤩
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Both lovely and interestingly done. I agree that your use of imagery is well done.
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Thanks a lot Bill.
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Your poem is so beautiful with such special effects Sadje! Love it! ❣️
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Thanks a lot Cindy ❤️🤩
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You’re so welcome💗
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💖🙏🏼💖
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I love the painting, the Don McLean song Vincent — and now your poem, too.
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Many thanks my friend
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👍🏼
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❤️
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Beautifully crafted.
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Thank you so much Phil
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A lot of pleasure! 🙏
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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My all time favorite painting! You did a great job with this!
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Thanks a lot my friend
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You are most welcome.
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❤️❤️❤️
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I like this, Sadje. Great words: ladies in waiting. xoxo
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Thanks a lot Selma 🤩
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Always a pleasure.
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🙏🏼💖
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As beautiful as the image
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Thanks Maria. This is super heartening compliment
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You’re welcome, Sadje. 🌷
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🌺🌺🌹
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Lovely, especially the closing lines, Sadje!
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Many thanks 🤩😍
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My pleasure. ❤️
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😍😻🥰
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I love the idea of planets as ladies-in-waiting. Cool!
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Thanks Sherry.
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Great, the sun is the star we should really take care of.
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Indeed, but actually it’s the otherwise around.
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Love the imagery in your words, Sadje! “Like a queen surrounded by respectful ladies-in-waiting” Love it!💞💞💞
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Thanks a lot Dawn.
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Sun, stars and planets… lovely!
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Thanks Chris! 😍❤️
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A lovely gentle interpretation of a painting I like. 🙂
I always think of the song … written about Vincent when I see the painting.
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Thanks Jules.
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Beautiful, with a classy ending!
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Thanks Sara. 🤩
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Lovely and interesting take, dear.
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Thanks a lot Indira 💖
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