“Each take is unique, and that is the beauty of a writing prompt. It takes each one of us on a different trail”




The hands of the clock
Revolve and come back
But the time flows
In one direction only
Like a river the waters of which
Never pass a point again
Lovers meet, embrace and separate
Time decides where,when, and how
Time is the important quotient
In the equation of life
The rise and fall of people
All depends on where they stand
In relation to ever-passing time
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Written in response to RXC 266, hosted by Reena
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Nice poem Sadje! 👌👍👏 I enjoyed these opening lines in particular:
“The hands of the clock
Revolve and come back
But the time flows
In one direction only…”
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Thanks a lot Ken. We both chose time as our prompt.
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Indeed we did Sadje! 👍😁 Great minds think alike and all that.
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😍😍😍
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Expressed with truths for sure… Lovely Sadje🤍
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Thank you so much Destiny ❤️
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Always welcome
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💖💖💖
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Great that you end the poem on Theory of Relativity!
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Thanks Reena! I’ve always loved physics. 😅
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Time: Our friend or enemy ….. by Sadje
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Thanks for sharing my friend
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Only time will tell what will become of us.
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That is so true
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Beautiful!
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Thanks EA
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Beautifully stated Sadje. Time is a revolving door, in a straight line.
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Oh yes indeed. Thanks my friend
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Bouquets!!
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❤️🌹
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Amazing
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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A great post sadje
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Time is an endlessly fascinating topic of discussion for me.
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Yes, it’s so fascinating.
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Good poem.
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Much appreciated
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“The rise and fall of people
All depends on where they stand
In relation to ever-passing time”
I love your closing verse Sadje…so on point.
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Thanks a lot Mich.
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I love the way you wrote this Sadje…. Brilliant! 💞
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Many thanks dear friend
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Such a profound post Sadje,. Loved it.. 🤗😊🙏🏼💕
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Many thanks Debika
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My absolute pleasure, as always.. 🤗💕
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🙏🏼🙏🏼💖
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks Michael
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Thanks for the great answer on the prompt, Sadje! Enjoy your weekend! xx Michael
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My pleasure. You too have a lovely weekend
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Truly beautiful, Sadje 🌷
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Thank you so much Maria 😍
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Great poem Sadje
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Thanks Brenda 🙏🏼
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It’s definitely a matter of perspective, I think. Awesome write, Sadje.
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Many thanks my friend
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Most welcome, my friend. It’s always my pleasure.
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😍🥰
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Absolutely beautiful Sadje! 💞💞💞 No matter how we try to turn back the clock, time continues flowing onward….💞
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Thanks Dawn. Indeed, the time that’s passed can never return.
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Time once spent, is gone… I love your time poem Sadje!
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Thanks Leigha 🌹
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You are welcome.
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😍
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Beautiful poem ♥️♥️♥️
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Thanks Belladonna
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