
“You aren’t a baby to create such a big mess”, her brother shouted when he saw the condition of the living room.
Natalia scowled at her brother and then looked at the things scattered around her, her eyes widening in acknowledgment of all the untidiness around her; did she do it, she wasn’t sure!
She knew that when she became absorbed in a project, she would lose her perspective of time and space resulting in an unholy mess around her, realizing it only when she was finished or if someone, like her brother, pointed it out to her.
Calmly she turned back to her project, leaving her scowling, angry brother speechless.
She picked up her collage and showed it to her brother and his jaw dropped in amazement; “do you think this can be the deserving cause of all this mess?” she asked with a big smile.
“Who can deny your immense talent Nat, but do try to clean up as you go,” he said in a placating manner, secretly proud of his sister’s skills.
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Written for Six Sentence Story- Mess, hosted by Denise
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Yes, creating sometimes does becoming absorbing. Great wisdom parable here Sadje. Thank you my friend.
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You’re very kind Suzette.
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Always a pleasure, Sadje.
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💝💝💝
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The story brought me in so much, I want to see the collage!
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Thanks a lot Rebecca. 😍
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Me too!!
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Me too!
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Thanks
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Natalia seems very intelligent, and I am impressed with her vocabulary.
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Thanks Jim.
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Lovely little story
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Wonderful storytelling, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks Kitty.
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Aaaw siblings pride… always heartfelt 🤍Lovely tale…
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Thanks a lot Destiny ❤️
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Welcome 🤍
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❤️
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Great story.Sadje, I didn’t know where you were going until the end 😁
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Thanks Brenda. Sometimes, even I don’t know how it’ll end. 😜
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How relatable is this and a great true story Sadje!!! ❤️
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Thank you Cindy. 😍
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Awesome Sadje! A great six!
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Thanks Carol.
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For the creative mind, so absorbed in the delight of making something come to life, cleaning as you go is not always an easy skill to master, but i wish her great good luck.
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Thanks Mimi. Yes it’s next to impossible to halt the creative process and clean up in between.
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When you enjoy what you are doing/are in the midst of creating, time and externals often seem to fall by the wayside like the first hint of winter snowfall.
These two siblings are lucky to have one another.
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Thanks a lot Denise! You’ve said it so well.
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Love her amazement at the mess around herself….and I too want to see the collage! 💞💞💞
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Many thanks my friend.
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yea nice story … a brother put in his place 🙂
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Thanks Kate. 😛
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I am glad to hear the mess resulted in a beautiful collage.
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Thanks Frank
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Brilliant storytelling Sadje❤️
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Thanks a lot Mich.
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I love this one, and I can totally relate!!!
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Thanks Jill.
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Loved this. I know it when I’ve to clean up stains of paint from table surfaces, despite the layers of plastic or paper I’ve placed underneath.
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Thanks Reena.
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Beautiful story.
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Thanks Maria
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How lovely, great tale Sadje
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Thanks Deb.
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Awww love this story
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Thanks Belladonna 👍🏼
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Stunningly poetic and with something for us to care about.
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Many thanks 🙏🏼
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Siblings can be a challenge when growing up… I think though that sometimes starting positive could reap a better result.
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Very true on both points
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🙂
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👍🏼
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This is a great story, Sadje ❤
~David
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Thanks a lot David
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