
A unique prompt from Denise DeVries this week;
Using some type of computer aid, write the first line of a poem. Then, follow it with between two and 18 of your own lines. You may use one of the links below or another site you like. Tell us which tool you chose.
I generated this poem using the last device, poem generator;
Guests laugh wild and fierce
Silver lines before the dawn
Ants march voiceless now
All night revelries,
men and beasts acting strangely
the insects quiet spectators
Day reluctantly dawned
excesses have taken their toll
hosts and guests all withdrawn
Resolves made to avoid
participation in such celebrations
no, never ever again!
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This is what I can come up with. Reads weird to me. What do you think?
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Fabulous poetry!! Love the last verse. Excess…not good.
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Thanks Suzette. It was something totally new for me. I’m glad you liked it.
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It’s turned out whacky and deep. Especially the second verse.
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Thanks Shashi. Wacky is the right word. 😜
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This is a lovely piece but I must be living in the dark. I find this disturbing that computers are now composing poetry. You are doing this as an exercise and of course being honest about what you are doing. What is to keep people from saying computer generated poetry is not their own. Your lines were beautiful by the way but I find this to be disturbing. I am curious about what other people think? I liked the lines the computer did as well. I must be living in the dark. Have a blessed day. 🦋🌹
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Thanks a lot! This was the prompt. I never had used this sort of device before but the results are interesting. Not very coherent but unique. There are now apps based on AI which can write posts/ stories too.
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Absolutely agree with you, Joni. I was just saying how I had experience with this type of writing in a group I belonged to and it was not for me. I found it off-putting and disingenuous. There are so many different types of programs of this sort. A friend told me of one that uses the predictive keypad on computers and phones! The poems were horrible, as you can imagine, and made no sense, but there were professors at a colleges who read the poems not knowing how they were written and raved about them. To me it’s like looking at a painting of a straight line and praising its originality. Some things have gone too far for my taste. 🐘 💫
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Amen, we are killing our animals, forests, potable water sources, and our oceans. Now we are going to kill our words that live and breathe inside of us. Unbelievable and yes I am definitely with you. 🦋🌹❤️
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. This is the kind of discussion I hoped to spark with the prompt. The media makes it sound like computers can replace writers, but the reality is that they can never be more than a tool. Especially when it comes to poetry, which comes from the heart and soul unique to humans.
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Love this Sadje and this a great haiku on its own 🙂
Guests laugh wild and fierce
Silver lines before the dawn
Ants march voiceless now
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Yes, this one is quite unique. I was flabbergasted at first but then I thought too carry on in the same lines.
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Thanks Grace.
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My pleasure 💕
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💝
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I do like it.
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Thanks my friend
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Beautifully penned Sadje
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Thanks Tanvir 💝
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The first one is OK. Mostly these are pretty bad though (including mine), so I don’t think we have to worry about the bots replacing human poets for a while…
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I agree with you Paula.
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I like your verses better than the techno created one.
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Thanks a lot EA.
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Wonderful poetry , Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Kitty
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I think you did a great job, Sadje, given what you were given. I really liked your last verse
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Thank you Brenda. It was a twister of a prompt.
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oh my you did great but why have poets if we are using the computer to generate. Oh no we’re obsolete and have been replaced. YIKES what next!
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Thanks my friend. I feel that that time is a bit far away for a computer cannot write on one idea. It’s a random generator. 🥰😍
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You make a joke, Cindy, but I think it’s a very good point. Personally, I am not wild about computer generated poem. I belonged to a writing group that occasionally used different types of computer generators and while there was a certain quirkiness to it and fun at first, it was not my thing. Others enjoy it and that’s great; I prefer the old fashioned way ❣️
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I do that too. It was a tricky prompt.
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Well when I saw all of the things that could obsolete us come out at first, I learned that you can not obsolete human kindness and shared hearts and I’ve never been much affected but I do think we have to preserve our hearts and minds. I’m sure it could be fun but like you say, different strokes for different folks Nanc! ❣️
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The poem generator worked well 😊
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Thanks Deb. 💝
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I’m in awe. That machines can do that! They must have fed tons of literature to a machine to be able to do that– golly. And the way I feel is that we will amount to naught if we try to compete with machines. Smart machines. How could we beat a computer? Can’t! I liked the poems that resulted form your experiment, though and I am perplexed that I liked them. Someone save me! I want to know that a blood and flesh human is writing things I read. Always. Not machines. But after this, I cannot tell the difference and that makes me mad. Angry even. Thanks, Sadje.
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Don’t worry Selma, a machine has no emotions and it cannot relate to a topic a a human can. There will always be deficits in its writing.
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Nicely done Sadje…that had to have been a hard prompt to follow! 💞
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Thanks Dawn. It was tricky.
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They’re okay. Still prefer your takes 🙂
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Thanks Maria.
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Weird is all in the eye, Sadje. No two people will see the same thing or have the same thoughts. I think what you came up with is quite unique and very interesting, and to me unique is very distinctive … not just a word to use when you do know what else to say.
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Thanks Nancy. Well we learn by doing and this was something else.
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I don’t think artificial intelligence will be able to replace a poet.
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I think so too. It can put pretty words together but not cohesive thoughts.
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Well, computer-generated poems are interesting but wacky, IMO. But, one can get an idea from computer-generated poems and perhaps, modify them to your liking. Your poems are great!
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Thanks Eugenia. It took me a while to work from it but it was a different sort of experience
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Most welcome, Sadje.
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This brings fantastical images for me like something out of a fantasy novel… Like.. Narnia or something… I think you really made something beautiful and creative out of the original 3 lines, which I would have found hard to work with! I don’t think I would have even attempted this, TBH.
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David
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I was tempted to find another poem but then I thought; why not!
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That’s just like my own internal process 😀
BTW, this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Brandon Ellrich, is now live 🙂
Enjoy ❤
~David
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Thanks David. Just bookmarked it.
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*hug* I’m so glad 🙂
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Thanks for your encouragement
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I agree with Suzette. I enjoyed every line. Lovely!
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Much appreciated Jeff. It was a hard one to follow.
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It’s always my pleasure, Sadje. Indeed.
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Weird in a good way. The computer may have supplied some lines, but the wisdom is all yours.
I immediately thought of New Years Eve. It was a surreal lesson in how our excesses affect even the smallest creatures.
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It’s good weird. A fun poem!
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Thanks D!
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