She’s invisible

January 16, 2023, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a lady shadow. Who is this person and why do they lurk in the shadows. What is the tone and setting for your story? Go where the prompt leads!

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A perfectly running home, a family whose needs are all taken care of, food cooked and served on time, clothes washed and ironed and floors mopped and everything dusted.

The lady of the house, a woman who has given up a lot of her life to raise the children, maintain the household, and make sure that everyone’s life runs smoothly, is herself like a shadow. You see her yet she is invisible. She doesn’t demands anything for herself.

We need to see the woman casting this shadow, look after her needs, fulfill her desires as she has right too.

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Word count; 99

Written in response to 99 Words Story, hosted by Charli Mills

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54 thoughts on “She’s invisible

  1. Like many good and unselfish women Sadje! Content to be in the shadows/ background, out of sight, providing for their families’ needs without looking for or needing credit. Brilliantly written! 👌👌👏👏

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  2. well said Sadje❣️”You see her yet she is invisible. She doesn’t demands anything for herself.

    We need to see the woman casting this shadow, look after her needs, fulfill her desires as she has right too.”
    👏

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