Murisopsis the poet of the week has asked us to write a poem of exactly 14 lines on poverty

Murisopsis’ prompt guidelines
Write a poem:
- Of exactly 14 lines;
- In any form or style;
- On the topic of poverty(moral, financial, romantic, etc.).
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Wealth doesn’t makes us rich
Richness of the spirit and soul needed
Needs and wants vying with each other
Others dreaming of what we have
Have and have-not in a clear dichotomy
Dichotomy dividing the society
Society in disarray
Disarray of the soul
Souls deprived of true values
Values that give purpose to lives
Lives lived empty, in a moral vacuum
Vacuum that expands to envelope our beings
Our beings empty like deflated balloons
Wealth and riches are useless, if we have poverty of spirit
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Written for; W3 # 36, hosted by David
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So apt and sadly many are poorer for just this.. Poverty of spirit. Absolutely lovely… 🤍
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Many thanks dear friend
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Always welcome Sadje… 🤗
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Beautifully written truths here, Sadje! 💞💞💞
“Lives lived empty, in a moral vacuum”….sadly becoming more and more of them in this world.
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Thanks a lot Dawn. Unfortunately, it’s true
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Those lines on the soul in disarray void of values resonated with my Sadje. Powerful poetry!!
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Much appreciated Suzette ❤️
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Thank you Sadje. A lovely poem indeed!
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❤️❤️❤️
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loved this. It’s deep and true. Thanks, Sadje.
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Thanks Selma 💖
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spirit is everything
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Oh yes, it is.
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Sadje this is a delight! Please go to the W3 page and link this with Mr. Linky! The poverty of spirit is a terrible state. I do like the loop poem form and you used it to great effect!!
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Thanks a lot my friend. Your kind words mean a lot to me
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Spot on.
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Thanks Sandy 💕
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My pleasure, Sadje.
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Some interesting thoughts summed up perfectly in the 14th line!
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Many thanks Keith 🙏🏼
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A much more dangerous and depressing poverty
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Indeed, one which we can perceive openly
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love this Sadje and so true!
“Wealth and riches are useless, if we have poverty of spirit”
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Thanks a lot my friend
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A pleasure! 💗
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💕🌹💖
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Very true. But unfortunately we all need money to survive
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That’s very true Deb.
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Does this style of poem have a name? I liked how the end of one line became the beginning of the next. You made it work so well.
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I think it’s a loop poem. But I didn’t finish it right as I wanted to say much more than the usual style allowed. Thanks
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You finished it just right. Even with specific forms, I say, use your poetic license.
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Thanks D! Yes if the message is incomplete, one should go beyond the science and do what needs to be done.
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This is so deep.The choice of words is so good. You have written excellent response. 🙏🙏
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Many thanks my friend
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Most welcome dear. 🙏
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Rich in wisdom, Sadje. ♥️
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Thanks a lot Dora
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‘Poverty of spirit’. Wow! Beautifully written post, dear.
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Thank you Indira 🙏🏼
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Most welcome, dear.
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I agree with all the above comments. Your poem is deep and moving and I agree 100%. “Wealth and riches are useless, if we have poverty of spirit” Sadly the two usually pair up as a couple.
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Thanks a lot my friend. This thinking that since I’ve money, I’m wealthy needs to change.
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You are so right especially since most people don’t have money! When I was younger I memorized the Beatitudes in the Bible. “Blessed are the poor in spirit – not meant as you said it, but those who are humble – for they shall inherit the earth.”
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Very right my friend.
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We are so right! 🙂
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💕💕💕
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Sadje ❤
I just wanna share that this week's W3, hosted by the sweet, lovely Sarah David, is now live:
Enjoy!
~David
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Thanks David
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*hug*
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Very nicely done Sadje!
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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My pleasure.
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My wealthier relatives have said that my own wealth is of the spirit and heart. I am grateful for that sort of wealth. Your poem outlines it perfectly.
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Thank you so much! Yes indeed, someone rich in spirit has a wealth that can never be taken away.
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