
This picture shows the image of a young girl standing on the edge of a water source, by herself, but there is a reflection of her and another girl in the water.
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Allison started laughing hysterically when she found out that she was the one without a corporeal form.
She hadn’t realized that she was a ghost and it was her sister Jenny who was standing alone on the edge of the water. But looking upwards, she suddenly realized that Jenny was standing there all by herself and what she had imagined, the unbreakable bond that had existed between her and her sister was broken the day she had drowned.
Well after this realization, Allison felt very light and liberated. She was free to float away to her heavenly abode while Jenny still had lots of living to do. She wished her sister goodbye and disappeared. But even after so many years of her death,, Jenny sometimes feels her shadow.
Written for 6 minutes stories, hosted by Christine
Also included FSS # 70, hosted by Fandango
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I enjoyed your lovely story, Sadje.
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Thanks Jim. It’s the first time I’ve done this prompt
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Loved your story Sadje!! Indeed bond between sisters is unbreakable💖
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Thanks Kriti
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Your welcome🥰
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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A beautiful story, Sadje!
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Thanks a lot Shruthi
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Wonderful story, Sadje.💕
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Thanks Grace
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💕🙏💕
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This was so touching Sadje!❣️
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Thank you Cindy. 💖
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You’re most welcome!! ❣️
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🤩🤩🤩
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Oh wow, Sadje ! You captured much emotion and freedom in this story. Really awesome!
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Thank you Suzette 💖
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My pleasure, my friend.
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🤩😍
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💐💗
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🥰
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Such a moving short story. Delightful read.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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My pleasure.
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Great take on the prompt Sadje, I’m glad Alison felt free
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Thanks a lot Deb 🥹
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Sounds like a true story to me. The picture and story line is keeping me in edge as a reader. 👌
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Oh thank you so much Ar. Much appreciated.
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This is fantastic!!! Could be the most amazing movie
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Thanks Belladonna. This image is amazing
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Aw, so sweet yet hauntingly scary!
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Thanks a lot Christine 😍
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Reblogged this on Stine Writing and commented:
Sadje’s sad and haunting tale…
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Thanks for sharing
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Ah, that’s a wonderful story, Sadje.
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Thank you so much
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You’re most welcome. Always.
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😍🥰
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Sad and hopeful, beautifully told. Love never fails.
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Thank you so much Dora
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A bit sad with what happened to Allison but glad she was able to move on and watch over her sister
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Yes, it was. This image is amazing.
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Love the perspective! Well written, Sadje! 💞
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Many thanks Dawn.
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beautiful story, Sadje.
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Thanks Audrine
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you’re welcome 😊❤️😄
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I cannot imagine how a twin feels at the loss of a sibling, from birth or after. Elvis Presely appaently also had a twin brother! If twins feel so connected how do other multiple births feel??
I just read a headline last week about an adult twin sister who died infront of her sister (and another)… I didn’t read the story. I don’t know the cause and cannot imagine the grief.
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There exists a special connection between twins or other multiple birth siblings. It is hard to imagine the feeling if one survives the other.
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There was a head line story about twins who were reunited after 13 years after being seperated at birth… I can’t imagine not knowing you were a twin (or mulitple) and maybe feeling some connection to another but being unable to reconcile it.
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Nice one, dear.
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Thanks Indira
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Beautiful.. Loved it.. 👍🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼💕
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Thanks Debika
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Such a moving tale, Sadje ❤️
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Thanks Shweta 💙❤️💖
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It’s a pleasure, my dear ❤️
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