
Write and let your light shine.
October 17, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that references “I see the light in you.” You can use the phrase or demonstrate it in a story. Who is shining and why? Who is observing or reacting? What is the setting? Go where the prompt leads!
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It’s easy to see the light in an innocent heart of a child. They are pure, uncorrupted by worldly desires and ambitions. I am always attracted by their sweet smiles, their naughty and mischievous looks, and their total faith in those who they trust and love unconditionally.
My oldest grandson is almost 13 now. He should be more worldly-wise now, but he has this naivety that’s so endearing. He trusts everyone, often to be hurt when they betray him. He is everyone’s well-wisher and sometimes is snubbed because of his well-meaning advice. But his light keeps on shining bright.
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Word count; 99
Written for 99 Word Story- Light, hosted by Charli Mills of the Carrot Ranch
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I hope your grandson always keeps that light!
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I hope so too my friend
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So sweet. Love it.💕
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Thanks a lot Grace
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My pleasure💕
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💖❤️💜
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I hope he holds on to that light. I wish we all could.
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Yes, I too wish that we never lose that sincerity or naivety. Thanks Brandon. 😍
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Awesome gift your grandson has, to see the good in people. May he cherish and guard so pure a heart.
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Amen. I pray so too.
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🙏
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🙏🏼
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I hope nothing in your grandson’s life changes his light.
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I hope so too. It’s always sad to see young people become cynical.
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Absolutely.
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👍🏼
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That’s beautiful, and I totally agree about the young, and their inner light. How lovely your grandson is to shine his light on everyone. 😍
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Awww, your grandson is indeed a strong person. I hope he keeps shining bright with his compassion.
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Oh bless him. Praying for his beautiful light to shine even brighter.
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Thank you my dear friend
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Your grandson is very fortunate to still be naive.
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Yes he is. Thanks a lot Deb.
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We should all have such pure and loving hearts as your grandson. Lovely story, Sadje 💕
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Thanks a lot Nancy. He is so sweet. But I guess I’m biased 🥰
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That is our right as grandparents! 💕
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😍🥰
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your grandson is amazing! beautiful piece, Sadje.
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Thank you Audrine. 💖
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That is very sweet, Sadje. The naivety associated with children is very special indeed.
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You’re so right my friend. It’s such an endearing trait they have.
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One thing I always said about both of my kids, and said with pride, was that they were really good people. No matter what mistakes were made I was happy that they were simply good people.
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Yes, that’s what really counts.
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The beauty of naivety is so heartfelt and growing older sobering. Lovely Sadje!
💞
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Oh Cindy you’ve said it so beautifully
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Lovely.
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Thanks 🥰
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I hope nothing diminishes your grand sons light! I hope the world stays kind to him ❤
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Amen. Thanks for your kind words Lolsy.
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I wish we call could shine with the light of a child 💞💞💞
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Very right Dawn. I wish that this light is always burning bright even when we grow older
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Brilliant and excellent story in such a few words dear Sadje. Nice to know his innocence at the age of 13 years.
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Thanks Kamal. He’s my darling
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You are always welcome dear and yes he sure must be 💝
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🙏🏼👍🏼
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💕💕😊😊🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Precious grandson, may his light keep shining!
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Amen. Thank you Joy
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Very welcome! ❤
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💖❤️💜
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I am not sure what is best, the child who is expected to be an adult or seen and not heard.
Or the child who is full of joy that others full of dark memories cannot embrace?
I used to teach young children. Some even at the age of three were manipulative nasty people because of what they learned from observing their parents. And others were happy to be guided and share laughter.
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Unfortunately, a child is quick to absorb the atmosphere around them. I pray that nothing quenches their light.
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Me too!
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Those grandchildren as so special. I loved this, Sadje. 🧡
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Yes they absolutely are. Thanks Colleen. 💜
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Hugs, Sadje. 💜
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Thanks my friend
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I appreciate your grandson, and the young people like him that I have met.
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Thanks D. He’s a sweetheart
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Love this post. Kids innocence is so heartwarming but they can be naive too.
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Thanks Sajjida. You’re so right.
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Children are precious.
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Very true my friend
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