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When night arrived, he climbed the stairs
It was the time for his premiere pastime
Lying supine on the roof top
Gazing at the string of stars
That celestial show rising tingles
In his mind and traveling to his spine
Visualizing himself in a yoga tantra
He got up totally relaxed and rejuvenated
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premier | spine | string | celestial | tantric
Written in response to Greg’s five words weekly challenge
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Wonderful piece, Sadje. Love it💕
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Thanks Grace!
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My pleasure 💕
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💖
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Very nice.
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Thanks Vijay
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Penned beautifully
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Thanks Lisa
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Lovely poem. When I was younger, we had a trampoline and I would sometimes lie on it at night and look at the stars.
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Thanks Brandon! I can just imagine it.
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Ah, I feel the relaxing energy. Namaste 🙏
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Thanks Suzette
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Perfect formula for relaxation Sadje.. your words set the tone❤️
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Thanks a lot Cindy
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A pleasure! xo ❣️
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💖😍
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Beautifully weaved, Sadje.
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Thanks Jeff.
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Most welcome, Sadje. Always.
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💖
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Lovely thoughts.
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Thanks Patricia
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Now that’s relaxation done right 🙂
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Wow, that does sound completely relaxing. Thank you so much for this calming vision.
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Thanks Joyce
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Of course.
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What a wonderful poem, he’s very lucky to have such a spectacular show
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Thanks Deb. Yes, indeed he is.
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Ahhh I’d love to be able to do this. What a beautiful imagery you’ve created, Sadje
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Thanks Maria! Greg’s words took me there
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Ah this is beautiful 💕
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Thanks Saania
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My pleasure! ❤️
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🥹
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Hi Sadje, Thank you for being the one and only participant in the inaugural Five Word Weekly. Such a beautiful poem, and excellent use of the prompt words. I remember summer as a kid climbing the old TV antenna and laying on the roof watching for shooting stars and satellites in the night sky. Back when the city lights didn’t blot out the sky the way they do now. It doesn’t help that old TV antenna towers have gone extinct and I’d need to pull the ladder out to get on the roof.
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Thank you so much
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Nice take.
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Good job on all the prompts Sadje, well done!
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Many thanks dear friend
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You are welcome,
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💙❤️🤎
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