
For the visually challenged writer, the photo shows a man wearing a yellow raincoat standing, back to the camera, on a wooden path with yellow autumn leaves on the path and on the ground on both sides of the path.
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When he heard the sound of voices coming from the abandoned building, he knew that he had to hide because standing in the open space would put him in danger of being caught.
Mathew was on a field trip with his classmates and they were all supposed to be studying the trees in the forest. The reason leaves fall in autumn, turn yellow or other earth colors was the topic of their field trip. But he had decided to play truant. He was roaming around and had abandoned his tree studying group.
He had found an abandoned shed and was about to investigate when he heard the voice of a man discussing something to do with a robbery. He quickly took shelter near the trees and kept listening to the conversation.
As soon as he grasped the gist of the conversation, he silently walked toward where his teachers and classmates were. He quickly informed his teacher about the whole incident. The teacher acted quickly and called the police. Thanks to Mathew, the gang was apprehended. As for Mathew, he was grounded for leaving the group and wandering alone, putting himself in danger.
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In response to FSS # 67, hosted by Fandango
Also included FFFC # 188, also hosted by Fandango
#Keepitalive
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A great fable, to include that lessons should be observed regarding protocol even when the motive isn’t terrible or happens to result in very good things.
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Thanks! That was the point
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Damned if you do, damned if you don’t. Good use of the two prompts, Sadje.
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Thanks Fandango. Hard luck but rules are rules.
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No good deed goes unpunished.
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😉
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No good deed goes unpunished.
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Haha! Well he did break the rules 😅
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Haha! Great moral of the story!
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I tried to make it realistic
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It is realistic 😂. What happens when you go sleuthing?
You catch a criminal and save the world. But oh yeah, you’ll get detention anyway.
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😂
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Also, since your narration is so good, the writer in me wants you to check out a blurb- https://beautifulthoughtsin.wordpress.com/2022/10/16/it-all-started-with-my-death/
Waiting for your review!
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Ah great story. And the morale of the story, I think, sleuthing can get you grounded in more ways than one.
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Lol! Yes, very true. Thanks
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My pleasure always.
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🧡🧡🧡
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What an unfortunate end for both Matthew and the robbers! Great story, Sadje.
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Thanks Shruthi! Mathew will recover and learn to not put himself in danger
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Hi Sadje, what a paradox! Glad Mathew did not try to apprehend the robbers himself.
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Thanks Rebecca! Yes that was a smart move.
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Now that’s an adventure every kid dreams of!
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For sure, a dream come true. Thanks
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It is tempting to wander from others but can be dangerous. Mathew was fortunate to become the hero and not hurt.
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Exactly right. Perhaps he’ll be more careful next time
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No good deed… 🙂
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Haha! Thanks Greg.
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Great moral here. I like it. XoXo
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Thanks Selma 🙏🏼
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Amazingly creative. Awesome story, Sadje.
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Thank you Jeff.
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You’re welcome, Sadje. Always.
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🙏🏼
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🎃🎃🎃
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👍🏼
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I’d like to think Mathew won’t be sad with being grounded. This inspires him to be a private eye or a detective in the future 😁
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I think you may be right.
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🔎
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Well done Mathew, well done teacher, and exceptional well written Sadje 😊
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Many thanks Deb. 🙏🏼🥹
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As many have already pointed out, “No good deed” …. but a very fine story. Well done, Sadje! 🌟
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Thanks Nancy. I was thinking what would people do it real life, and that’s what occurred to me.
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You chose wisely!
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Even though Mathew got grounded, he did a noble thing. Good for him.
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Yes, exactly. Thanks Joyce
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Of course, Sadje. ^_^
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💖
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Poor matthew! Grounded! But he did a good thing, informing his teacher about the robbery!
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Thanks Carol.
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For a visually challenged writer… What about a writer not visually challenged? What will they see?
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It will be up to us what we see. This segment is to help people who cannot see clearly or not at all.
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Oh! I get it now! I thought it was some kind of metaphor. 😁
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👍🏼👍🏼🥰
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Choices have rewards and sometimes punishment.
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Very right
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(oh… I think WP has stopped the double comments – Thank goodness!)
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What a relief
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Indeed – instead of the 4 pages (25 to a page) I would have had 8 pages… ugh!
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🥰
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A nice story Sadje!
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Thanks Leigha
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You’re welcome.
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😍
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So easy it imagine this story as I read…poor Matthew, but as a parent I’d be proud while doing the same thing! 💞💞💞
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Thanks Dawn.
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