
Your need to control my life
Has undermined our relationship
You’ve put me in a gilded cage
And think that I should be happy
My pleas for freedom fall on deaf ears
But don’t be complacent because one day
I will steal the key and set myself free
A cage is a cell even when clothed in luxury
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Written for;Moonwashed Musings Weekly Challenge –Gilded – September 6, 2022, hosted by Eugenia
Also included;
Tuesday writing prompt: Write a poem using the words “control” and “undermined”
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Wonderful take, Sadje. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much Grace
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My pleasure.💕
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💜💚❤️
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Reminds me of Richard Lovelace –
“Stone walls do not a prison make, nor iron bars a cage…”
Sometimes it’s hard to break free of a prison; even one we’ve made for ourselves.
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Wow! Poignant words. Thanks for sharing Brandon
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To Althea, from prison💖
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Fantastic, Sadje 💕🙂
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Thanks a lot Harmony. 💖
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Wonderful poem Sadje!
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Thanks Sheereen ➰💖
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Perhaps but do not forget that nothing is hidden under the sun and another without a key could await you on the other side.. hopefully it’s well understood??
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You are probably right.
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I love this ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank Sylvia
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you’re welcome 🙂
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Thanks my friend
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my pleasure 🙂
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💖
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Excellent take on the prompt, Sadje! Your piece expresses an awareness of entrapment in an unhappy relationship. All that glitters isn’t gold.
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Thank you so much Eugenia. Yes, what may look attractive from outside may be ugly on close quarters.
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You’re welcome.
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Beautifully penned!
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Thanks Chaya
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Oh, that last line resonated! Well penned Sadje. Brava!!
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Thank you so much dear friend
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And thank You! 💐
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😍🥰
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Well done! Good use of the prompt.
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Thank you so much Patricia
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Good job 👏🏾
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Thanks Oiwuri.
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So very true. Lovely write, Sadje.
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Most welcome. 🙏
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😍
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Love this, Sadje!
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Thanks a lot Sara
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Beautiful, Sadje. Reminds me of Maya Angelou’s, I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
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Thanks a lot Maria. I must read that poem
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Such a beautiful piece of work Sadje 🤝
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Thanks a lot Dest.
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You’re most welcome Sadje 💖
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Excellent take, dear. A cage is a cage…
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Thanks Indira! Exactly right.
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Perfect Sadje, you nailed it
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Thanks a lot Deb.
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So true! Wonderfully said!
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Thank you so much dear friend
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My pleasure.
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💖
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A wonderfully written piece! Looks can be deceiving… just because it is all pretty and sparkling doesn’t make it any less harmful.
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Thanks a lot Leigha! Yes, very true.
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You are welcome.
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😍
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Beautifully done!
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Thanks a lot Dawn
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This line: “A cage is a cell even when clothed in luxury”. Lovely poem DocMom.
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Thank you so much Dawn.
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A pleasure 🙏🏽💗🙏🏽
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👍🏼➰
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