Rebecca of Fake Flamingo has challenged us to write a Haibun this month, the topic is;
Door

For the challenge, write a brief paragraph of up to six lines or sentences in poetic prose without rhyming. Then write a related haiku using different words than the prose (like the cousin rather than a twin). For a detailed description of haiku, see the October 2020 challenge. Finally, title your poem, or title it first if you like. The theme is door. Choose to write about a physical or metaphysical entrance; beginning, portal, invitation, threshold, new age, or next step. You are not required to use the word door. Rated G please.
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Knocking on the wooden door I feel the anticipation. Apprehension too for who may open it or what it may entail. A door is a portal to an unknown, unexpected place. Bravely I push it inwards.
With a silent swish
The wooden gates glide open
Secrets are revealed
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love your take on this. going through a door is always a bit of a gamble/adventure –
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Thanks a lot Beth. You’re so right opening a new door can be an adventure
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Excellent! A bit of mystery to this one and I like it a lot. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Barbra
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I love it! ❤️👌
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Thanks a lot
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Doors are intriguing. You never know what’s on the other side until they are opened.
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Exactly right Patricia. Thanks
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Very good! You reminded me of a friend who is an artist, who placed a portal door on his property. My husband and I have a photo with him in front of the door. I’m giving you a link to the artist’s website with a photograph of the door. https://retirementallychallenged.com/tag/snake-jagger/
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Thanks EA
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This is brilliant! Looks like it IS a portal to another place
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It’s fabulous. Every fall there is an artists’ tour where people can walk into homes and studios. That door get a lot of attention with people taking photos.
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That’s a cool idea
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Intriguing and interesting, Sadje!
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Thanks a lot Punam 💜
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My pleasure. 😊
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❤️❤️❤️
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Ooooh. Bravo on another wondrous piece, Sadje. It’s also a brilliant tribute to doors, in general. ^_^
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Thank you so much Joyce.
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You’re very welcome. Hope you’re feeling better. ^_^
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Thanks! I am much better. Now waiting to see the doc who is on a few days leave.
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Ah, I hope you are able to get in contact with him or her soon. ^_^
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Three more days to go. Thanks
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Awesome! Keep going strong!
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Thanks 🥰
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Wonderful Sadje, this worked so well
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Thanks a lot Deb. Taking baby steps to learn new poetic forms.
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I know what that feels like 😊
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💕
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I enjoy the positivity and positive expectancy in your haibun, Sadje. Love it!
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Thank you so much Suzette. You’re so kind
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Always a pleasure 😊
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💜❤️💖
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Well done! 🙂 ❤
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Thanks a lot Deborah
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I love doors, the anticipation and mystery, as you write. Lovely poem, Sadje.
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Thanks a lot Jeff.
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You’re welcome, Sadje. It’s always my pleasure.
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🙏🏼
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So intriguing, Sadje!
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Thanks Shruthi
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Oohhh good take, Sadje
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Thanks a lot Maria
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Excellent haibun, Sadje! One never knows what might be on the other side of the door.
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Thanks a lot Eugenia! It was the first time I attempted this.
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Most welcome, and good for you for trying something different, Sadje!👍
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Thanks 🥰
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You’re welcome, Sadje!
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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This is so well done.. love it Sadje!
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Thank you so much Cindy. How are you doing my friend?
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you’re so welcome! Digging out.. thanks so much for asking.. you can see by my delayed responses 😂😎😱
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Take care. Thanks a lot
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Thanks my friend and you’re so welcome! 💖
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My pleasure
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I like this, very much: the tension between that nervous anticipation, with more than a hint of positivity at the end!
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Thanks a lot Margaret
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Fantastic! You captured the sense of excitement so well.
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Thanks a lot Nicole
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Ooh, secrets. Good or bad, who knows. Well done Sadje!
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Indeed, it remains a mystery till it opens.
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This door and your piece remind me of part of a show I watched where a young woman belonged to a restricted covenant were only three other nuns lived. They had a heavy door that kept the public out!
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Yes, this for looks like it’s meant to keep people in or out !
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Yes it does… like to some castle!
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Yup!
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