
Her heart quivers with excitement and trepidation
Behind the veil, her eyes look on apprehensively toward future
Uncertainty rolls in huge waves in her already tense thoughts
Was this the right time, the right guy, or the right decision
Perhaps it’s time to pick up her dress and bolt away
Marriage is a sweetly bitter dish not suited to all palates
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Tuesday writing prompt: Write a poem using the words bolt and veil
#Keepitalive
#TWP
Oh my and to think how many feel that day and walk down the aisle anyway. My daughter called her wedding off 3 months before. Not the one getting married in Sept. better safe than sorry.
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Yes, that’s something very common. I hope that this wedding goes smoothly and they live happily.
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eh you kept the vow
high ho now
how?
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That’s yet uncertain
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Great piece, Sadje. So many rush into this big decision without enough thought or they continue through the red flags to not disappoint others. Wonderful .💕
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Thanks a lot Grace
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Welcome 💕
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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The truth well said, Sadje.
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Thanks a lot Suzette
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My pleasure my friend 😊
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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The whole poem is awesome but the last line is amazing❤
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Thanks a lot my dear
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Welcome❤
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💞
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great leap of faith
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Oh yes, it is. Thanks
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It is indeed a life-changing event. ^_^
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Very true Joyce
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^_^
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👍🏼
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A fitting take on the prompt, Sadje! Indeed, the uncertainties of the future can be very intimidating!
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Very much so. Thanks Shruthi
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And I married a guy I’d known for three months
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And it worked well. 💞
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I loved this! Wonderfully descriptive writing we can all relate to on one level or another. Great stuff!
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Thanks a lot Nancy
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You are very welcome! Thank you for all the tech help. Sometimes I really need it!
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That’s how we all learned ❤️
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An excellent take on the prompt, Sadje!
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Thank you so much Eugenia
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My pleasure, Sadje!
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👍🏼🙏🏼
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That’s so true, Sadje. A lovely poem, my friend.
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Many thanks
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Most welcome. It’s always my pleasure.
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🥰
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Seems we were thinking along the same line here, Sadje. This is wonderful!
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Thanks a lot Sara! Yes, quite similar
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♥️
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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This reminds me of a comedy movie I saw years ago. The bride kept getting cold feet! 😀
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Lol, I’ve seen such a movie too.
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😉
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