
June 27, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about swarms. What could swarm? How does the swarm impact the people or place in your story? Is there something unusual about the swarm? Go where the prompt leads!
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I was four when I had my first encounter with wasps . I was alone on the veranda one summer afternoon. There was a hole in the wall and I saw a yellow butterfly crawl into it. I was intrigued so I stepped in for closer observation and was suddenly attacked by a swarm of wasps.
My mother came running when she heard my screams. Mercifully, my memory is a bit hazy but I remember being given medication to control the allergic reactions to the stings.
For a few days I was the favorite one in the family.
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Word count: 99
Written in response to 99 Word story- Swarm, a challenge hosted by Charli Mills of Carrot Ranch.
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My husband tried to rescue my stepfather’s cat out of the neighbor’s tree. He encountered a swarm of wasps and it looked like a cartoon of them chasing him down the tree and over the fence. He got stung at least 20 times. Also, the neighbors release their rottweilers on him. Not a good day, but it was memorable.
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Oh no! Thatβs just too much tragedy in one day.
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It was a scary day. We gave my husband benadryl and watched him closely..
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I can imagine
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Nicely done!
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Thanks Paech
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I can’t imagine how was scared you must have been. Being bothered by just a couple of wasps is scary to me.
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Thankfully I donβt remember much after the attack. Thanks Patricia
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Eek, that must have been scary for you, but I love the way you ended the story!
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Thanks a lot Kristian. π
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Urgh, I hate wasps! One got down my shorts once and had a field day! Arghhhh.
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Oh, goodness, that must have been terrifying. You did a wonderful job of taking us through that intense moment, though–and providing a warning at the same time to be careful of wasps’ nests.
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Thanks a lot Joyce.
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Of course, Sadje.
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Sounds horrifying! Glad you don’t remember it too clearly. I love the way the story comes through in such a small space.
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Thanks a lot Sarah.
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I sure hope that wasn’t a true story Sadje!
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Oh it was. Thanks ππΌ
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Oh my!!! What a memory π
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Yes, thankfully itβs dim now.
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Good thing! π
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There were lots of wasps where I grew up, not a fan. Great share, and story, Sadje.
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Thanks Jeff. Nopes, Iβm no fan anything that bites of stings.
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Youβre welcome, Sadje. Itβs always my pleasure. Ah, exactly, me either.
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What a sweet story. The last line is β€
I am assuming this was the yellow wasp which has a fairly potent sting.
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It is, and it has. Thanks Natasha β€οΈ
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Nice story sadje, I like it
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Thanks a lot ππΌπ
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You’re welcome
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Poor butterfly βΉοΈ
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Or poor me! ππ
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Ouch!! Glad you were okay.
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Thanks Joy! ππ
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You are welcome! ππ
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Wow! what a scary experience, Sadje! Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks Eugenia! It was scary at the time.
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I can only imagine.
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My goodness! It is fortunate your memory about the rest of it is now hazy. My dad got stung by a wasp some years ago. It was not a good experience
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Thanks Maria! It mustβve been very painful. I guess thatβs why my brain has blanked out all of it.
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It hurt him a lot and he was feverish. I think you’re right. You’re brain was protecting you from the pain
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I think so too. Thanks
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Nice share.. Short and relatable story.. ππΌπππΌππΌπ
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Thanks a lot Debika
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We only learn we are allergic to something once we get a reaction. While I know some plants don’t like me… I wasn’t aware of bugs bothering me until I had a quarter size swell from a ‘No-see-Um’ – the genertic name of a biter in Florida. I was helping to trim a bush – thankfully it wasn’t a swarm. Glad you recovered. While I don’t need to keep an Epi-pen with me I know some who do! Stay safe!! π
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Very true. Sometimes the second reaction is way more serious than the first one.
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I was also a child — maybe 6 or 7? — when I was climbing a tree and stepped in a hornet’s nest. It wasn’t a huge one but it was big enough. I’m still very wary of wasps and hornets. They scare me!
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They are scary! Iβm glad most of the memory of that incident has been wiped clean of my brain
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Hi Sadje,
I was hoping this was fiction – but it seems not.
Yikes – what a nasty surprise.
We have yellow jackets here and they attack for almost no reason at all and love to dig their underground nests in my yard. Many of these small demons have fallen trying to infest our place. I have strategies to fight back.
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Thanks Gary! I was too young to know that it was a hornet and not a pretty butterfly! Yet I survived the attack.
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Oh my! Hard way to learn that lesson Sadje.
I’ve survived a few things that could be argued should have taken me out of the gene pool but here I remain.
Now – all I can do is laugh about them and share them whenever someone might need a laugh at the stupid things young boys can dream up.
Which reminds me, there was this one day. . .
https://garyawilsonstories.wordpress.com/the-rock-quarry-adventure/
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Thanks Gary!
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What a horrific shock, to go from a sweet innocent butterfly to learning the hard way about wasps. Man, they hurt!
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Yes, they do. I was lucky that my mind blanked out the hurt but I learned a valuable lesson that day.
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