
June 20, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about what freedom feels like. Whose point of view do you use? Does the idea of freedom cause tension or bring hope? Let the reader feel the freedom. Go where the prompt leads!
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Freedom is a gift that only the people who don’t have it, value. Those who have experienced the usurping of their rights appreciate freedom fully.
If you ask a woman how free she is?
She’ll tell you that her choices are limited by the men of the society.
Ask a person of color about freedom and they’ll tell you their limitations.
For the poor people, the concept of freedom is totally warped.
Some people are born free with the freedom to choose what and who they want to be in life. They don’t realize how precious this gift is.
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Word count: 99
Written for 99 Words Story- Freedom, hosted by Charli Mills of Carrot Ranch
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freedom is one of those words which I think means something different to everybody.
Plus, there are degrees of freedom.
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Yup, that’s true. I think we all think of freedom as something to be coveted.
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but often somebody’s freedom impinges on someone else’s
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Ideally, it should NOT.
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of course, but people are selfish.
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Not everyone Pete. Some are nice people
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People in general
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Perhaps! But I’m an optimist so I like to see the bright side of life.
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For some freedom is a choice, it’s said that letting go is hard but being free is beautiful.
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Indeed, very true Keith.
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Wonderfully penned, Sadje! Freedom is subjective, great thought👏🏼👏🏼
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Thanks a lot Deeksha.
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Beautifully crafted, Sadje. True words👏👏
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Thank you so much Komaljeet
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My pleasure, dear❤
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👍🏼🙏🏼
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Your piece does make me think of something those who carry many minority statuses often say: everyone has some privilege. Then again, I am pretty sure that comment comes from a privileged standpoint, ie. from those who can access the Internet. I bet poor people in developing countries would disagree.
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We all have different definitions of freedom. Thanks Astrid
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Yes, I agree Sadje. Well said!
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The price of freedom is to “know” that one is free!
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Very true, at whatever the cost.
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Yes! Amen to that!!
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💕🙏🏼
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Thanks a lot Suzette
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Always a pleasure.
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😍
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Only those who are shackled (by society, poverty, colour, race etc.) know the value of freedom.
Well said, Sadje.
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Indeed, very true Punam. Thanks my dear
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Couldn’t have said it better myself…Sadje and paeansunplugged
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Thought provoking!!
“Freedom is a gift that only the people who don’t have it, value.”
💖😘😘
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Thank you so much my friend
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I think the same thing about voting. It’s a privileged, appreciate it
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That’s true. Thanks Deb
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Freedom is taken for granted by those who have never been imprisoned in some way.
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Yes, ext
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Exactly
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That’s absolutely true, all of it. I completely agree. Awesome post, Sadje.
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Many thanks Jeff.
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You’re welcome, Sadje. Always.
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Some, but not all who are born without the restrictions of worrying about food, clothing or housing do often seem to be a bit flippant about what is truly valuable. I remember either through school or some other local organization that students were asked to pretty much spend overnight in a cardboard box, and families where asked to spend a week as if they were living on foodstamps – thus having to buy lesser quality products or day old… One would hope a new understanding and more compassion would spring forth new ideas to support and help.
Actually there is a ‘food box’ by a local elementary school near us to put in supplies for families in need. I donate items there…like dry and can goods. Also once a year our Boy Scouts and Postal service do a food collection for the local food banks.
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That is how it should be. Caring for those less blessed should be the responsibility of those who are better off. Thanks for sharing Jules.
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Thought provoking, Sadje. Nicely written …
Isadora 😎
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Thanks a lot Isadora
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Freedom currently is an American woman grappling to come to terms with the anti-abortion law. Such sad state of affairs. It’s like living in 1800s.
Lovely string of words, Sadje.
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Thanks a lot Natasha. You’re so right and it’s unbelievable.
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💛 Sadje. Group hugs to all the women battling this untoward decision.
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Indeed. 🤗
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I love this! Another thought, does too much freedom cause more problems than solutions? Do some (or all) Americans have too much freedom?
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I think that is subjective. People can either use freedom wisely or misuse it. Thanks
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It’s obviously true
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Thanks Martin
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Yes. This prompt made me realize how lucky I am. Precious and precarious freedom.
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Indeed, I too am lucky in this respect. Thanks D
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Hi Sadji,
Nice job on this.
Question; for your line:
“For the poor people, the concept of freedom is totally wrapped. ”
Did you perhaps the last word to be ‘warped’ ?
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Thanks Gary! It should be warped. Thanks 🙏🏼
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True!
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