
My heart was broken beyond repair
The one responsible had no remorse
My child clinging to my dragging dupatta
Her eyes asking a thousand unanswered questions
In her eyes I find the pain that tears me apart
But in her tear filled eyes I find my courage too
I will rise to this challenge
I will rebuild my self that has been demolished
It took me years, effort that often broke me
But whenever I looked into her eyes, I found my courage
Now I stand tall and proud
I have crossed the barriers erected in my way
I now stand with pride
With my daughter by my side
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Written for;RXC; PROMPT #229
The prompt line for this week is
“I have untapped abilities waiting to be discovered.”
( I submitted this poem for the anthology, The wounds I healed but it wasn’t accepted. I think it fits well with this prompt)
#Keepitalive
#RXC
The picture is cute. But your lines
I will rebuild my self that has been demolished
It took me years, effort that often broke me
lend so much more depth to it.
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Much obliged my friend
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Always welcome!
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
We are our strength ….. by Sadje
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Thanks a lot Reena for sharing
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From the picture to her looking in your eyes was beautiful! My kids were the reason I finished college. I wanted them to be proud of me.
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Thanks a lot Belladonna.
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This is fabulous, Sadje. So beautiful and touching. I absolutely love it.💕
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Thank you so much Grace.
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Truly a pleasure .💕
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🙏🏼
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Heartwarming share Sadje. I feel the emotions in this one. Bless you.
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Many thanks for your encouraging words
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My pleasure, dear friend.
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💙💜
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Such a lovely poem of finding courage Sadje! 💖
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Thanks a lot Cindy
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You’re always welcome my friend! 💖
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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This is beautifully written. Oh i love the message, plus the cute picture that speaks.
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Thank you so much Lamittan
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Feel most welcome, Sadje. 💖
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Finding courage is not easy…you wove this with lot of warmth and love. Lovely pic too.
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Thanks a lot dear friend
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My pleasure always.
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💙💜❤️
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks a lot for sharing Michael
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Beautiful poem and I love the picture too, so lovely and powerful to me! 💝
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Thank you so much 😊
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Wow, your words create such a beautiful image of the many aspects of love, Sadje. It’s beautiful. I love this one.
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Thank you so much Jeff.
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Most welcome, my dear friend. It’s always my pleasure.
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‘In her eyes I find the pain that tears me apart
But in her tear filled eyes I find my courage too”- Oh these lines were so moving, Sadje! Such a beautiful and poignant piece! 💖
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Thanks a lot Shruthi! Your kind comments are much appreciated
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You’re welcome, Sade
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😍
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Awwww …this is so heartfelt Sadje..💕💕
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Thanks Mich.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot Eugenia
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Most welcome, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Lovely poem. And raw emotions. Lovely
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Thank you so much Lakshmi
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Reblogged this on Sharing Thoughts.
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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My pleasure.
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So beautiful and touching, dear. Loved it.
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Thank you so much Indira
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This is a lovely post, Sadje, appreciate it’s positive tone. xoxo
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Thank you so much Selma.
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This was wonderful Sadje, so well written!
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Thank you so much my dear friend
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You are welcome.
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