
February 21, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, “I’d rather be…” You fill in what comes next. What would a character(s) rather be doing and why? How can you use the phrase as a literary device? Go where the prompt leads!
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Ask a child and he’ll tell you that he’d rather be outside playing than studying
Ask a harassed mom, up at midnight and she’ll tell you that she’d rather be sleeping soundly
Ask an overworked office worker and he’ll inform you that he’d rather be hiking or skiing somewhere pleasant
When we are in an inescapable situation our mind drifts
And we dream of places we’d rather be in
Yet most of us stick to our hectic lives, dutifully
These pleasant dreams are kept hidden in our thoughts
Taken out once in a while to be appreciate and admired
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Word count; 99
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Precisely and marvelously written, each sentence contributes to the thought. 👏✅
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Many thanks my friend
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Most welcome, Sadje my friend.
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Dreams do keep us going. Excellent write, Sadje.
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Thank you so much Punam.
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My pleasure.
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Wisdom and truths beautifully penned, Sadje.
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Thanks a lot Suzette
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Always a delight my friend.
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I agree with all of the above!! 💖👏👏👏
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Thanks a lot
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awesomely written Sadje! ❤
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Thanks a lot Carol.
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Great write! 😀
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Thanks a lot Susan
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Loved it ♥️♥️
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“I believe in God, but not as one thing, not as an old man in the sky. I believe that what people call God is something in all of us. I believe that what Jesus and Mohammed and Buddha and all the rest said was right. It’s just that the translations have gone wrong.” – John Lennon
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Thanks Natasha! Beautiful quote and so very right. The interpretation of religious doctrine can sometimes fail to convey the whole
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Thank you dear Sadje. Hope you are doing well.
Just realised my comment got posted via email, but I’m glad the John Lenon quote resonated.
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You’re welcome! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Oh that’s nice to read! And very true! 😅
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Thanks Chaymaa
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Enjoyed the read ~ life’s reality ~ where would we be without hopes and dreams? Well penned. 🙂
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Thanks a lot June.
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You wrote what everyone can relate to in one way or another. As usual, well done.
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Thanks a lot Patricia
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That’s so true, the mind loves to create these alternative realities. Lovely poem, Sadje.
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It’s our escape hatch.
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Oh, I like that.
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Thanks 😎
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I’d rather be reading your wonderful poetry than attempting my less than quality prose.
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Oh thank you so much Lauren. But I disagree my friend as I find your posts very interesting
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You are kind.
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I’m honest 😎
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and participate in this Word Prompt! Write your answer to “I’d rather be . . . “
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It does take a conscious effort not to be weighted negatively. Is that maturity? Is that being responsible?
May we find time to enjoy our lives and live 🙂
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Amen. Well said Jules.
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A lovely read, Sadje! 😉
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Many thanks Eugenia
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You’re welcome, Sadje.
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It’s beautiful.. Just loved it.. 👍🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼…
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Thanks a lot
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Nice
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Nice! Yes, everyone’s “rather be” is somewhat different due to age and circumstance, but most people live in the shadow of having a preference, an idea of greener grass.
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That is right D. We dream of things that may not be that idyllic when we actually do find them.
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