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Was that sun or moon in the sky, she wondered
The birds were doing their ritualistic dance in the air
Stark silhouettes outlined by the pinkish hue
Her eyes wandered in search, close and afar
When will he come?
She was prepared to wait for him till eternity
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Fantastic response again this week in response to this image. Please click on the links to read the contributions of our lovely participants.
Lauren; What do you see # 116
Kittysverses; She keeps changing
Chris Hall; Afterwards
Fiery females; You will see her fly
Reena; Let them scoff
Ami; Safe
Lady sighs; The fire it burned
Radhika; The unending wait
Maria Michaela; Freedom dance
Sangeetha; Sky is on fire
Keith; Believe it or not
Michnavs; Indigo sky
The novel reader; What do you see # 116
Myrna; The wonders of thee
Regina; Travel dreams begin in the sky
Melanie; WDYS # 116
Susi; Evening jaunt
Jim; The omen
Jules; Measuring success
Eugenia; Predictions elusive
Diana; Birds in flight
Paula; When the moon hits your eyes
Marla; I the see beauty in vengeance
Maria; Who know who she was
Mrid’hues; The scattering
E M Kingston; Chicken hawks
Jude; Haiku tales and upcoming book teaser
Fandango; Howling at the moon
Nope, not Pam; What do you see # 116
Suzette; The lost hat
Inkdrop; Moondance
Sidney; Fly away
Sri; The solitary reaper
Happy Soul; She danced
Punam; Apprehension in the air
Jeff; Wish upon the birds
I am grateful to all those who have read, shared and commented on these posts.
I will be posting next week’s challenge on Monday at 12:00 pm, PKT.
Thanks for reading.
#Keepitalive
#Whatdoyousee
#WDYS
Oh, I hope he comes soon! Your piece doesn’t even need the image as your words create such a lovely visual, Sadje!
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Thank you so much Susi!
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You’re welcome, dear!
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Your beautiful words makes me feel as though he will come soon!
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Thank you so much Belladonna
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Beautiful poem, Sadje. Always so much fun. Thanks for the prompt, my friend.
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Thanks a lot Jeff. Thanks for joining in
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You’re welcome, Sadje. Always my pleasure.
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🙏🏼
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i’m confident he will arrive
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When a heart calls, the heart s answers
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I love your poem, Sadje, and agree with Susi. It’s so visual. I’ve loved all the varied responses I’ve read so far, and see I have a lot of catch up reading to look forward to 🙂
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Thanks a lot Chris.
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Oh, what a poignant poem! Thanks for the prompt 💖
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Thank you so much Sam for your support
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I’m sure he’s on his way.
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😍❤️
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Beautiful Sadje! Loved it. 👏
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Thanks Maria
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Beautiful lines. The imagery is too good. 👍
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Thanks Shashi
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Because the image reminds me of a child – I am thinking of a daughter waiting for the return of a father.
It reminds me of the time my father traveled for business and we didn’t see him for weeks at a time.
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It does looks like a girl waiting for someone.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come Enjoy The Round-Up!!
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Beautiful words of pure devotion to him… he will come to her, wont he?
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He will! Thanks Leigha.
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My pleasure,
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😍❤️
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