
Searching for clues
Baffled by the mask he wore
There was frost in his words
But warmth in his thoughtful actions
The oscillation between Love and indifference
Was tearing her into two
The actions of her significant other
Was it deliberate or sub-conscience projection?
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Written for Tuesday Writing Prompt;
Today’s prompt: Write a piece of prose or poetry using the words frost, mask, and significant other
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I liked this unique use of the word frost. “There was frost in his words”
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Thanks Myrna.
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Wow, perfectly woven, using the prompt! Wonderfully done! 👌
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Thanks Sam. I’m glad you liked it. 😍🙏🏼
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Love this Sadje! ❤ ❤
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Thank you so much Carol
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You’re welcome my friend 🌼
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💖
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Brilliant use of the words Sadje. I love how you used the word frost
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Thank you so much Lorraine
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You are welcome Sadje. It is a beautiful poem
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You’re so kind and supportive. 💖
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You are welcome Sadje, and youvare kind and supportive to me too ❤️
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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This is awesome! I loved the use of contradiction and your use of the word “frost” too.
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Thanks Astrid.
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Love “frost in his words”. Great use of the words!
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Thanks a lot my friend
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Mmmm. An interesting reflection. Lovely poem, Sadje.
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Thank you my friend
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“The oscillation between Love and indifference
Was tearing her into two” I like these sentences. This happens when there are expectations. I found it heart touching 💜
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Thanks a lot Jane.
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Most welcome Sadje ❣️
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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