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Welcome to “Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge.”
The painting below is by Edward Hopper.For the visually challenged writer, the painting shows a woman sitting at a table in a restaurant or diner. A man is sitting at an adjacent table and seems to be staring at her.
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He thought he knew her, she seemed familiar. But he couldn’t remember if he had actually met her or had seen her somewhere before.
As the waiter served her afternoon tea, he caught his eye. “Do you know who this lady is? ” He asked in an undertone.
“No sir, she is new here”, replied the man as he hurried away.
Meanwhile, the woman was joined by someone. And Jarred immediately knew him.
He quickly left some money on the table and walked away. It wasn’t safe for him to be seen by this man.
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Oohhhh, great start on a story. This one needs to be fleshed out in the near future. I’m already hooked. 😁
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Thanks Larry! The painting inspired it and the ending is up in the air.
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Intriguing 🙂 Well done!!
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Thanks Cranny ❤️
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What next??? 😃
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What do you think?
Thanks 🤩
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It’s like a trailer, which compels us to watch the full movie.. 😀
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Haha! You’ll have to imagine the rest of the story 😜
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Grrrr!! You always leave us hanging…🤪
Well done, Sadje!🤗🥰🌷
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Thanks Angie! It’s fun this way when you can imagine why it was so!
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Oooooh, like everyone in the comment string, I want to know what’s next. Imagination? I feel like we’ve had this conversation before. 🤣 Excellent short story, Sadje. Well done.
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Yup, we had the same conversation about another piece I did. Thanks 🤩
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Indeed, we did. You’re welcome! 😎
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You always leave us wondering.
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Thanks Patricia! You can create your own ending.
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That’s a cliffhanger xx
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Haha! Thanks 😊
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Okay, that is certainly intriguing and could be taken in so many different directions. Well done, Sadje.
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Thanks Fandango!
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Compelling! Well done, Sadje!
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Thanks Eugenia.
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Most welcome, Sadje!
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You pulled us in and left us hanging! Good job!
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Thanks 😜
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