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PROMPT #178
I give you the last line …
If I’m God, why do I need a bird’s eye view?
Write the remaining piece as you like, but it has to end with this line. It is okay, if the line appears more than once in the piece, in the beginning, or middle, but it has to be there at the end.
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I lift my joined hands in a prayer
I ask You for Your help in trouble
You the Almighty, the all powerful
You know what’s in my heart and mind
God, the all knowing, Omnipotent, Omnipresent
Before we know what’s in our thoughts, You know
Before it befalls us, it is in Your knowledge
No detail, big or small escapes Your eyes
I bring my prayers and pleas to you
It is in my prayer that I admit to being weak
And I humble myself in front of you in submission of my will
For you are God,
Why would you need a bird’s eye view
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I made a change in the given line as I cannot, even in verse, presume to speak for God.
I hope it is acceptable!
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This is a beautiful prayer! And to this I say, Amen!
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Thank you so much Carol. I thought of you when I was writing this. I knew you’d like it.
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Thank you, Sadje and I do!
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❤️😉
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Of course, it is acceptable 😃 Beautiful composition!
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Thank you so much Reena.
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If I’m God, why do I need a bird’s eye view….by Sadje
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Thanks a lot for sharing
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Beautiful, Sadje!🙏🌸
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Thank you so much Angie 😍
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Beautiful prayer.
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Thank you so much my friend
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This is a beautifully written prayer, Sadje! 🙏
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Thank you so much Eugenia.
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My pleasure, Sadje!
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😍
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Lovely prayer. ❤
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Thanks a lot Sa
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Beautiful prayer, Sadje. God’s view is more than bird’s eye, and you pointed out in your poem. He sees within us at all times. Birds only fly during the daylight. God view is omnipresent. Beautiful.
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Oh, thank you so much Marsha. This prompt evoked my deeper feelings. Much appreciated.
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I can see that, Sadje. You are a woman who thinks deeply.
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Your words of praise have made my day. Thanks 🤩
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I’m glad, Sadje.
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😍
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Beautiful, Sadje. Love this one. ❤️
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Thanks a lot Jeff
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Welcome, my friend, Always.
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😉🙏
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