When the sun was eaten alive by rain clouds
Its luminescence swallowed whole by rogue vapors
A bolt of lightning staked its claim in a flash of rebellion
In denial, the sun tried to break through the grey shield
But these nimbus clouds are very adept at overpowering
The sunny yellow, goggle-wearing light with their grayness
And we, the humans are witness to this struggle of dominance
And enjoy each turn of the weather with appropriate gusto
In response to the following prompts ;
YDWP;
3TC;
FOWC;
RDP;
Word of the day challenge;
#Keepitalive
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Very cool! I like it!ππ
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Thank you so much Angie
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ah, i can comment and like now. How weird I couldn’t earlier.
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Thanks π
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Yes Sadje… we are only humble observers a nature’s stormy wonders…
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Yes, exactly. Thanks Ivor
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Oh dear Sadje, your poem is just so timely as my home country has just been hit by a huge storm and there is a massive flooding …
Its heartbreakingππ
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Oh Mich, I am so sorry to learn that. Stay safe my friend
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Thank you Sadjeπ
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so graphic Sadje, great imagery!
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Thanks a lot Kate.
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most welcome!
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Such a clear vision. Nice job.
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Thank you so much
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Love this, Sadje. The daily prompts have really helped you hone your poetic skills.
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Thanks a lot Punam
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You are welcome.
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I keep saying this, but you are good at this.
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Iβll never tire of reading this. Thank you so much my friend
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks Chuck.
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Always a joy to view and share your posts, Sadje!
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Loved this, Sadje! Very dramatic! Thanks for the seed of inspiration you left me in your post! It bloomed and blossomed into a poem for me – if you might like to see it please email me – chucklindholm@hotmail.com
xoxox
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Thatβs wonderful. ππ
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email me – chucklindholm@hotmail.com and I will send it to you! Would love your input?
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You weaved together the prompts perfectly!
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Thanks π
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You are welcome.
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