42 Words-Thriller & Suspense

Deb Whitman is the host of 42 Words


What are we looking for folks?  Well in a nutshell I’m going with the obvious example, Psycho and the shower scene?  Yep, your on the edge of your seat and afraid of the fall, its going to happen any moment now, don’t turn your eyes aside or you’ll miss it folks.

Thrill me, folks but remember there is a significant limit to the bang for your buck, 42 words to be exact.  Use them very wisely.


The door creaked loudly.

She jumped nervously and looked at it.

There was no one there…..


The voice was coming from the patio.

Suddenly the room was plunged into darkness.

She ran for the door but couldn’t find it.


42 Words


My poor attempt at creating a thriller with suspense!



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