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Hidden deep in the forest, stood this ancient structure
Made of hand-hewn stones it intrigued every passerby
“What is that?” Asked an innocent young voice
“Ah, sweetheart this is not a place meant for children to visit”
“You mean it is an evil place?” She asked
“Oh no my love, it is a place of magic, a portal to past”
“But should be approached with extreme caution and care”
When you’re older I will tell you all about it, gramps promised
“Till then you should bid your time and stay away”
But children never listen to the voice of experience and reason
They are still looking for her in the jungle, whereas
They should have traveled to the past where she’s growing old
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Wow…That’s quite an imagination. Loved this, Sadje.
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Thanks Ramya π
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ooooo………this is great!!!
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Thank you so much Wendi
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absolutely!!!
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I love your imagination!!
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Thanks Kristian π
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Oh this was really nice!
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Thank you Saania
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Tramps should have told her it was a dirty kitchen or a school room… that would’ve kept her awayπ€£π€£π€£
Great story, Sadje.π€π₯°
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Youβre so right, kids are definitely more intrigued when told to stay away.
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Very nicely written π
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Thanks Dulcy
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Fantastic. π
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Thanks π
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I love that last line… in the past, growing old π
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Thanks Crispina
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Loved this, Sadje. It reminds me so much of the Chronicles of Narnia. π
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Thanks Sa.
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Excellent story, Sadje! Loved the twist at the end. π
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Thanks Susi
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You’re so welcome! π
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A little bit of magic in the end… nicely done!
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Thanks π
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My pleasure.
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