~*~
She was nervous about today
She had danced for others but
Never in such informal settings
But as soon as the music hit her ears
Her feet kicked off the shoes and
Like in trance, she started to move
The music flowing with the flow of
Water in the fountains was just the
Background to her fluid rhythmic steps
~*~
My heartfelt thanks to these wonderful participants who contributed wonderful poems and stories for this week’s challenge.
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I will be posting next week’s prompt at 12:00 am PST Monday morning.
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You capture her energy, Sadje, in a lovely way.
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Thank you so much Dora.
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You’re so welcome, Sadje. Thanks for the weekly roundup to catch up on what we may have missedπ π
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Itβs a pleasure Dora. Itβs the participation of you, my readers which makes this prompt work. Your support is much appreciated.
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Its really beautifully penned π
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Thanks a lot π
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My pleasure π
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Beautifully penned, Sadje, and thanks for the mention.
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Thanks Eugenia. Itβs a pleasure. Thanks for being a part of this challenge. π
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Most welcome!
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It’s lovely! Well penned, Sadje. π
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Thanks my dear
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Lovely poem, Sadje! I particularly like the way you capture the feeling that her body is taken over by the music: ‘…her feet kicked off her shoes…’
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Thank you Chris.
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You’re welcome! Putting my head in the clouds now… π
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Okay! Waiting for the outcome!
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beautifully written!
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Thanks Era
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Thanks Sadje. I remembered to give this week’s composition a title!! Hurrah!!
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That always helps. Thanks
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hehe.
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listening to musical water, like getting lost in a book we can create our own world π
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Oh yes, indeed
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Great poem for the pictures. Captures the freedom of dance.
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Thanks Leigha
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You are welcome.
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The visual is perplexing.
One toe points
Two reflect
Dimensions?
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